Flight 103 passengers: John Ahern, Sarah Aicher, John Akerstrom, Ronald Alexander, Thomas Ammerman, Martin Apfelbaum, Rachel Asrelsky, William Atkinson, Judith Atkinson, Clare Bacciochi, Harry Bainbridge, Stuart Barclay, Jean Bell, Julian Benello, Lawrence Bennett, Philip Bergstrom, Alistair Berkley, Michael Bernstein, Steven Berrell, Surinder Bhatia, Kenneth Bissett, Diane Boatman-Fuller, Stephen Boland, Glen Bouckley, Paula Bouckley, Nicole Boulanger, Francis Boyer, Nicholas Bright, Daniel Browner, Colleen Brunner, Timothy Burman, Michael Buser, Warren Buser, Steven Butler, William Cadman, Fabiana Caffarone, Hernan Caffarone, Valerie Canady, Gregory Capasso, Timothy Cardwell, Bernt Carlsson, Richard Cawley, Frank Ciulla, Theodora Cohen, Eric Coker, Jason Coker, Gary Colasanti, Bridget Concannon, Sean Concannon, Thomas Concannon, Tracey Corner, Scott Cory, Willis Coursey, Patricia Coyle, John Cummock, Joseph Curry, William Daniels, Gretchen Dater, Shannon Davis, Gabriel Della-Ripa, Joyce DiMauro, Gianfranca DiNardo, Peter Dix, Om Dixit, Shanti Dixit, David Dornstein, Michael Doyle, Edgar Eggleston, Turhan Ergin, Charles Fisher, Clayton Flick, John Flynn, Arthur Fondiler, Robert Fortune, Paul Freeman, James Fuller, Ibolya Gabor, Amy Gallagher, Matthew Gannon, Kenneth Garczynski, Kenneth Gibson, William Giebler, Olive Gordon, Linda Gordon-Gorgacz, Anne Gorgacz, Loretta Gorgacz, David Gould, Andre Guevorgian, Nicola Hall, Lorraine Halsch, Lynne Hartunian, Anthony Hawkins, Pamela Herbert, Rodney Hilbert, Alfred Hill, Katherine Hollister, Josephine Hudson, Melina Hudson, Sophie Hudson, Karen Hunt, Roger Hurst, Elizabeth Ivell, Khalid Jaafar, Robert Jeck, Paul Jeffreys, Rachel Jeffreys, Kathleen Jermyn, Beth Johnson, Mary Johnson, Timothy Johnson, Christopher Jones, Julianne Kelly, Jay Kingham, Patricia Klein, Gregory Kosmowski, Minas Kulukundis, Ronald LaRiviere, Robert Leckburg, William Leyrer, Wendy Lincoln, Alexander Lowenstein, Lloyd Ludlow, Maria Lurbke, William Mack, Douglas Malicote, Wendy Malicote, Elizabeth Marek, Louis Marengo, Noel Martin, Diane Maslowski, William McAllister, Daniel McCarthy, Robert McCollum, Charles McKee, Bernard McLaughlin, Jane Melber, John Merrill, Suzanne Miazga, Joseph Miller, Jewel Mitchell, Richard Monetti, Jane Morgan, Eva Morson, Helga Mosey, Ingrid Mulroy, John Mulroy, Sean Mulroy, Karen Noonan, Daniel O'Connor, Mary O'Neil, Anne Otenasek, Bryony Owen, Gwyneth Owen, Laura Owens, Martha Owens, Robert Owens, Sarah Owens, Robert Pagnucco, Christos Papadopoulos, Peter Peirce, Michael Pescatore, Sarah Philipps, Frederick Phillips, James Pitt, David Platt, Walter Porter, Pamela Posen, William Pugh, Crisostomo Quiguyan, Rajesh Ramses, Anmol Rattan, Garima Rattan, Suruchi Rattan, Anita Reeves, Mark Rein, Diane Rencevicz, Louise Rogers, Edina Roller, Janos Roller, Zsuzsana Roller, Hanne Root, Saul Rosen, Andrea Rosenthal, Daniel Rosenthal, Arnaud Rubin, Elyse Saraceni, Scott Saunders, Theresa Saunders, Johannes Schauble, Robert Schlageter, Thomas Schultz, Sally Scott, Amy Shapiro, Mridula Shastri, Joan Sheanshang, Irving Sigal, Martin Simpson, Cynthia Smith, Ingrid Smith, James Smith, Mary Smith, Geraldine Stevenson, Hannah Stevenson, John Stevenson, Rachael Stevenson, Charlotte Stinnett, Michael Stinnett, Stacey Stinnett, James Stow, Elia Stratis, Anthony Swan, Flora Swire, Marc Tager, Hidekazu Tanaka, Andrew Teran, Arva Thomas, Jonathan Thomas, Lawanda Thomas, Mark Tobin, David Trimmer-Smith, Alexia Tsairis, Barry Valentino, Thomas Van-Tienhoven, Asaad Vejdany, Nicholas Vrenios, Peter Vulcu, Janina Waido, Thomas Walker, Kesha Weedon, Jerome Weston, Jonathan White, Bonnie Williams, Brittany Williams, Eric Williams, George Williams, Stephanie Williams, Miriam Wolfe, Chelsea Woods, Dedera Woods, Joe Woods, Joe Woods Jr., Andrew Wright, Mark Zwynenburg.
Comment . This is not a usable dialogue. This fills time and page-space, but it does nothing for drama or story. What about– “Stay back, they bite.” But this has no realism to it. When nothing is working, look for a greater problem. Should the idea be expressed in dialogue? Let’s think about this for a minute. “Is that a Gila monster?” may not be direct character dialogue that is useful in any story. The dialogue is being used to inform the reader of the presence of a potentially dangerous creature. For dramatic fiction, a scene must have a purpose, and it must have action. “Is that a Gila monster?” has no effect in fiction; it sounds contrived; and it needs drama with conflict between the character(s) and the forces of nature (monster). Realistically, the dialogue speaker must be afraid, or planning escape, or figuring out a way to kill it, or admiring it’s unusually threatening size, etc. A key revision might be to remove this information from dialogue.
The three ruled out the workers when Lawrence remembered the powder. By putting a flame to it, the puff of smoke that followed implied it was Duclos' flash powder. Indiana was woken the next morning by a hand clamped over his mouth. It was Lawrence, and he needed him stand guard while he searched Duclos' tent. Indiana kept an eye on the photographer walking through the site and followed him as Duclos went inside Kha's tomb. The camera flashed within the chambers and seeing Duclos may be heading back in his direction, Indiana ducked back inside an alcove. The wall behind creaked and he fell backwards into the upright body of Kha. The skeleton collapsed on top of him and, pinned to the floor, Indiana screamed fearing Duclos was coming to kill him.